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Old 06-19-2007, 10:23 AM   #1
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I am currently a member of this forum, but I have made this account in order to remain anonymous. While I am a lurker I still don't want to deal with any rants or backlash from this post.

I have recently been composing stories jointly with somone and we take turns writing them and have found them to be comparible in stimulating arousal with other forms of visual pornography. It is almost a much fun to write them as to read them in my opinion. Having discovered this we would like to share a story and get some opinions on it and on how arousing you find it to be personally.

*READ THIS* I do not want any Critique, however if you must please send it to me as a Private Message. Please do not post any opinions on the content of the story itself, each one is tailored to different interests, points of view and levels of dominance by each character. Note that this one is female point of view, where she plays the more dominante role, is highly aroused and the story only takes place with two people.

***** Please no rants or flaming just honest opinions and feedback as I described above don't attack anyone's interests. I want even lurkers to feel safe posting their opinions here :)

*For moderators* Please lock or delete this thread if it gets out of hand in any way.

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A windy and rainy autumn evening. You came to visit me for a couple hours, but the weather got totally awful in the meantime so I simply asked you to stay overnight. Having known you for several years, we're very good friends and maybe even something more. We spent a lovely evening on a semi-date.

It's already very late, you're sitting on the couch watching TV. I'm laying down next to you, resting my head on your crotch. I can almost feel your hard member - watching that erotic movie must've turned you on, although you try to hide it. Suddenly you get up, excuse yourself with a long hard day tomorrow and head off to sleep in the guest room. Grinning to myself I head upstairs to my own room, quite sure neither of us will fall sleep fast today.

I'm laying on my bed half-naked, my nightie covering only the bare necessities. Images from the movie we saw earlier keep flashing in my head, I can feel myself being aroused. My hand moves on it's own, slowly along my side and up to my breast. Remembering your hard cock hidden in your pants I softly rub my nipple through the thin fabric of my nightie. I grab my whole round breast with my hand and squeeze it slightly, sighing happily at the sensation. Feeling a bit hot I kick the covers off the bed. The cool breeze from a half-open window sweeps across my naked legs, sending shivers down my spine. I can feel my nipples harden up under my own touch, poking out through the cloth, silently asking for more.

I put my left nipple between my thumb and index finger, slowly rolling it between them. Jolts of pleasure shoot across my chest. I move my second hand down my belly, pull up my nightie and then touch my panties. As I expected there's already a nice wet spot there. Spreading my legs a bit I start rubbing my panties with my fingers, imagining it's you rubbing your cock up and down my drooling slit. I can feel the heat building up, I start moaning softly to myself against my will. Trying to keep quiet I bite on my lower lip. My breath quickening, I pull the nightie all the way up to my neck, caressing my almost naked body. Slipping my hand inside my panties I rub my clit, arcing my back in pleasure as I feel my underwear getting wetter and wetter.

I slip my thumbs on the both sides of my panties and quickly pull them off down to my ankles. Seeing them soaked and my own pussy glistening wet makes me even hornier. I start rubbing my pussylips raw, with my whole hand. I can't keep quiet anymore and let out a loud moan, my both hands on my crotch now, one rubbing my clit, the second one slowly spreading folds of my pink pussy, ready to sink a finger into the dripping hole. I spread my legs wide now, driving my finger deep into my pink pussy, pulling it out with a dirty squelching noise, then sliding it all back in again. Suddenly the door to my room open and you enter.

Seeing me lie almost naked on the bed, masturbating openly makes you stop halfstep, stunned and unable to take your eyes off my dirty crotch. You just stand there, shirtless but still with your jeans on, staring at me as I keep pleasing myself. Looking at you I remember that hard cock in your pants. I keep rubbing myself as I look at you, watching a bulge slowly starting to form on your pants. I know I could get off right here and right now, but why would I be the only one to have fun? I get up, making my panties fall off my ankles, walk up to you naked and exposed, sexy wetness glistening on my thighs. I slam the doors shut behind you and push you back up against them.

Pushing you back against the door I cling to you with whole my body, squeezing my breasts between our bodies, my nipples grinding on your muscled torso. You open your mouth to say something but I quickly silence you kissing you fiercely on the lips. As our breaths mix together my hand rubs your growing bulge, stimulating your penis to grow. The thought of me having it soon turns me on even more. I can't wait anymore, my hands are hastily undoing your pants as we explore each other's mouth with our tongues. Finally your pants and undies hit the floor, my hands quickly wrap around your hardening manhood, stroking it slowly to build up the tension quicker. Our lips part and I kneel down in front of you, devouring your slab of sex-meat with my eyes as it grows bigger and bigger before me. I can hear you swallowing nervously and I grin at you and my tongue flicks once across the tip. I can feel you shiver from excitement as I extent my tongue again and lick in circles around your hot red cockhead. My hands are slowly massaging your thick shaft at the base, stroking your length.

I can feel it grow fully hard in my hands, the sight of a fully erect massive cock makes my pussy ooze in anticipation, a few drops of sex liquids dripping out of my burning hot fuckhole. Looking up at you I slowly wrap my soft lips around the cockhead, sucking slightly as I move my head further down on it, filling my mouth up with your hot, hard cock. I can already taste your precum oozing out. I lick it all up with a naughty smile, it's taste and smell overwhelming my senses. My mouth smoothly slides back and forth, I can feel your stiffness pulsating with lust inside my mouth as I wrap my tongue around it. You groan in pleasure as you feel you're already close to orgasm, trying to warn me with little nudges but I just grin and wink at you - I want you to come into my mouth. Gasping in amazement at me you start thrusting your hips against my head, speeding up the pace, shoving your cock deeper and deeper between my hungry lips.

Your throbbing cock tells me you're ready to come, I wrap my lips around the rim of your head and start sucking hard while my tongue teases that special spot. My hands are both holding your shaft firmly, stroking fast. Letting out a loud groan you can't resist it anymore and peak loudly. Suddenly I feel large streams of your hot sticky cum shooting straight into my mouth, again and again, filling it up with your juicy white goo. I keep sucking greedily, determined to make you give me everything down to last drop. My hands slowly pump your sensitive hose, stimulating it for more tasty cum. After a while you're spent dry and I let you slip out.

Breathing heavily you look at me, my mouth full of your cum, my tongue swirling it all around inside, savoring the taste of your love juice before I gradually gulp down your whole load, swallowing your white cream. At that point I feel so horny I could explode, my pussy pumping out sex juice like crazy, soaking my crotch and thighs, screaming for some hard cock. Standing up I pull you towards the bed and lie down on it, shamelessly spreading my legs to show you just how wet I already am. You don't need any more invites as you quickly lay down with your head between my thighs and start cleaning up my mess with your tongue. I feel your tongue slide up and down my thigh, licking up the wetness before you start lapping directly at my soaked slit. Your hands reach up to my breasts, caressing them softly as your tongue penetrates deeper between my pink folds, tasting my excitement. Feeling your tender touch on my pussy and breasts, I moan out excited, my pussy getting hotter and hotter as you drive further into my insides. I feel like I'm about to cum when you suddenly let go, grab my waist and pull me up to yourself. Suprised I stare at your all-hard again erection pressing firmly against my pussy, sliding along the lips, teasing with it's rock-hard grinding, rubbing against my clit.

Finally you drag the tip of your manhood along my slit and slowly enter me, meeting little resistance from my drenched hole. I lay down on my side, putting my leg over your shoulder as you slide all the way inside, filling up my pussy with your raging hungry club. After just a few thrusts my whole body trembles as powerful long-awaited orgasm washes through me, my pussy squeezing tight around your cock, squirting my girly cum all over your crotch. You keep fucking me slowly, letting me ride out my orgasm to the fullest. After I come down from my peak of sexual pleasure, you lie down next to me and we snuggle sighing happily.

I look down at your crotch, you're still hard and apparently unsatisfied. Even though I just came I still want more as well. Grinning naughtily at you I reach down and slowly start to stroke your cock again, sticky with my juices, I get my hand all messy doing it but I don't care. You sit up and watch me, but I stop and sit down in your lap backwards, softly stroking your length with my pussylips. You wrap your arms around me, feeling my breasts and gently pinching my nipples, nuzzling my neck and shoulder while I wiggle my rear around teasingly. You keep groaning into my ear and I know you want to fuck me bad and cum again, so I decide to give you a special treat.

I pull myself up a bit and spread my legs widely, putting my feet on either side of you. Then I reach with my sticky dirty hand and grab your cock sticking out from below me. I can feel it pulse with heat in my hand, you want to fuck so bad it turns me on. I slowly rub your cockhead down along my slit, but then continue down and rub it on my tight asshole. I hear you gasp behind me, suprised and excited. Finally I put the tip on my rear and press down on it with my body. There's quite some resistance at first, as your stiff piece slowly squeezes it's way into my ass, rubbing hard on it's walls. The feeling of your thick cock penetrating my anus is overwhelmingly arousing, despite the little pain caused by my butt not being used to accomodate such big, meaty lenghts of pure sex. You bite down on my neck, panting from excitement of actually doing me in my ass.

I slowly raise myself, making your cock slide almost completely out of me, then push back down, slamming my rear into your crotch, taking your throbbing hot penis all the way up my ass, moaning loudly at the sensation. My pussy starts flowing with nectar again, my second peak drawing nearer with each of my movements. Your hands squeeze my breasts, moulding them as I slowly ride up and down, fucking myself anally on your thick shaft. As I speed up the pace I feel you thrusting back at me from below, our bodies slapping together loudly. Your cock is like a burning hot wedge lodged in me, I feel it's about to explode. You feel it too, groaning behind me, biting down harder on my neck. Suddenly you yell out loudly and I can feel you cum again, deep inside me. Streaming white liquids fills me up, it's like burning lava shooting into my sensitive ass. I rub my clit frantically and scream in another orgasm soon after, my pussy pumping out girly cum uncontrollably, dripping down to my asshole and your cock still inside me.

The anal orgasm you gave me left my ass and pussy incredibly sensitive. Seconds after I come down from my peak you thrust into my rear again, sending a lightning bolt of ecstasy up my spine and make me cum hard again. Reaching around me you put your fingers on my pussylips, parting them and sliding inside while your thumb massages around my clit. My whole body is shaking as you pound my ass yet again, dirty squelching noises coming from it. It takes but a few seconds for me to moan weakly as yet another orgasm hits me. But you don't stop, your still-hard cock keep fucking my cum-dripping asshole, your fingers keep rubbing inside my pussy, looking for my g-spot. I feel exhausted but your cock still grinding inside my rear is still to much to bear. Holding my breath I peak again, and again, before you can't take it anymore either and shoot another juicy load of sperm into me, making it overflow with your love and leak white creamy goo out onto your cock and balls. I pant heavily, completely spent, resting my back against you, watching your cum slowly flow out of me and stain the sheets. I turn my head and kiss you long and passionately, locking our lips and tongues together.
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Old 06-19-2007, 10:47 AM   #2
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That's interesting (even though it's done.. it just kind of ends.)

Is this Rina, giving Coordykins a "taste" of what could be?
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Old 06-20-2007, 09:27 AM   #3
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Sorry about the abrupt ending it was getting pretty long. Pretty good results on the poll it looks like. Anyone else have opinions or thoughts on this type of media? With respect to arousal.
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Old 06-20-2007, 09:38 AM   #4
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Sorry about the abrupt ending it was getting pretty long. Pretty good results on the poll it looks like. Anyone else have opinions or thoughts on this type of media? With respect to arousal.
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*READ THIS* I do not want any Critique, however if you must please send it to me as a Private Message. Please do not post any opinions on the content of the story itself, each one is tailored to different interests, points of view and levels of dominance by each character. Note that this one is female point of view, where she plays the more dominante role, is highly aroused and the story only takes place with two people.
 
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Old 06-20-2007, 10:09 AM   #5
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Sorry about the abrupt ending it was getting pretty long. Pretty good results on the poll it looks like. Anyone else have opinions or thoughts on this type of media? With respect to arousal.
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*READ THIS* I do not want any Critique, however if you must please send it to me as a Private Message. Please do not post any opinions on the content of the story itself, each one is tailored to different interests, points of view and levels of dominance by each character. Note that this one is female point of view, where she plays the more dominante role, is highly aroused and the story only takes place with two people.
I am trying to establish a difference between this type of media and the actual story here. I do not claim to be a professional writer of erotic stories, I've just been doing this for fun. That's what I'm trying to establish here.

Feel free to make a request for different content but in this forum filled with hentai/RL porn videos and images I'd like to know what stories like these do for people personally that have had access to these images already. It seems to me like it's a step back but I like how it's able to be more sensual and I find that arousing.
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Old 06-20-2007, 10:43 AM   #6
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too many words = turnoff
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too many words = turnoff
Too much description not focusing on the point? Or was the story too long for you?
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Old 06-20-2007, 11:37 AM   #8
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too many words = turnoff
Too much description not focusing on the point? Or was the story too long for you?
i just dont really like reading in general lol :P
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Old 06-20-2007, 12:07 PM   #9
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i just dont really like reading in general lol :P
And yet you browse the internet religiously? :wink:
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too many words = turnoff
Too much description not focusing on the point? Or was the story too long for you?
i just dont really like reading in general lol :P
lol, I understand thanks for the input though :)
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Old 06-20-2007, 09:22 PM   #11
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i just dont really like reading in general lol :P
And yet you browse the internet religiously? :wink:
thats a different kind of reading lol
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thats a different kind of reading lol
Ohhhhh. You mean short attention span reading.
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thats a different kind of reading lol
Ohhhhh. You mean short attention span reading.
yes :) its ftw!
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thats a different kind of reading lol
Ohhhhh. You mean short attention span reading.
aka retard reading.
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I liked it a lot, especially the end :wink:
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Haha, I didn't see this until now, but wow dude, you're a very talented writer. It's written very descriptively, I can actually see it in my mind from reading though it. Very nice job (sorry, I do a lot of writing too, so I cant help but analyze it more than just read it lol)
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